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I feel so lonely,
Wondering if Only,
I don't know how to think,
But I'd better learn quick before I sink,

Closer to the edge now,
Oh really? Wow,
Is this what you really are?
I couldn't have envisioned something so dark,

I wish you were there,
But now I just don't care,
I wish I could help myself,
If only you thought of anyone else,

But I can't blame you for everything,
I am, myself, exempt of nothing,
I drove myself into hell,
By telling you all I could tell,
Inspired by two Nine Inch Nails Songs, Only and You know what you are?

This may feel like it was ended too quickly, judging by the length of my prior works, but this is exactly how long I intended it to be.

I went to a church service, and seeing that so many things were dragged on for far too long, I decided on writing shorter poems now.
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Kendecia's avatar
I really love this. Sure its short. Butits still meaningful. Although it left something hanging in the air...a response of some kind.

Like a secret...about to be devulged...only to be drawn back in by the sudeenly scalded tongue.

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